Well....
The melodies are decent but the synth is pretty boring. You just need a better sound, or a few sounds overlapping, cause it has no like depth or anything. Needs to sound more dancey. You need more then a good melody to make it something to dance to.
So just fix the main synth, and it should be better. But for now its a...
3/5 6/10
But I feel it could be a lot better so dont give up :)
oh....
Didnt even see this one when I reviewed the other version this haha. But yah much better bass lol. And again I will say the end product should turn out good.
Its cool
But the bass is really weird sounding. I mean yah I know you said that but yah please fix it lol. Besides that I think the end product should turn out quite nice.
Its not bad...
but it isnt the best either. It needs some work, but the overall sound isnt that bad. I am not sure what to do with it really....I am just used to people like benni bennassi's style when I think of electro. But its pretty cool so
3.5/5 7/10
GREATTTT
This is a grreaaattt song. The distorted bass sound and the melodies are AWESOME. If i had to pick out a couple things.....:
1. Maybe turned down the echoed crash a little in the beginning
2. Make a more exciting intro to draw people in and listen to the rest of the song-cuz the rest is great
3. And yeah like you said it needs mastering
Other that that....its great! Keep up the good work!
-LR-
Ok, one thing with point 2, What i like about that boring beginning is the fact that its rave. As i said below, it gets you going! And people who REALLY know their music know that so they hear the boring first part and they are gonna be like "SWEET! Its gonna be a cool rave!" Anyway, thanks for this review, I will take your advice, although the intro is still going to be slightly bland i'm guessing.
grrrr
my computer is being really slow today, so i dont feel like going through the whole song, but from the beginning i must say that i liked it. What did you use for the main sound? So yah its pretty cool.
8/10 4/5
-LR-
The main sound?
You mean the lead? at the start its "A simple saw" From Nexus and the main lead is "Another World" From nexus
I like it
it's subtle, but still drum and bass. Its a little different then most. So for making it entertaining, but slower, i must say is pretty cool. Anyway good job, and yah i could see it as menu music (not in a bad way though). So yah....
8.5/10 4/5
Wow this is Nice!
I find it very dancey and well put together. My only problem is that since the intro is long i feel the song should also be longer. I mean don't get me wrong i think the intro is the right size and everything....but once the dance part comes in there is only a little over a minute of the song left.
So if it has 'dance' in the name just extend the dance part a little more. But yah i guess it might get a little repetitive....well either way nice job! Maybe check out some of our stuff too?
9/10 5/5
-LR-
Amazing Haha!
I found the original boring, but the lyrics still sounded good and felt it could be cool if remixed. And you DEFINETLY made it sound more interesting lol. Great Job!
9/10 5/5
-LR-
I wuv you :3
I disagree
It doesnt sound bad at all lol. Nice job. I want to listen to more of your stuff. All i have heard is this and on the way (which i love) Anyway good job, makes me want to dance. 9/10 5/5
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-LR-
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