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its pretty good but some of the sounds are maxing out (thats the crackling sound) and that just ruins the whole song. other that that, just obviously make it longer!
7.5/10 4/5
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melodies are fine but EVERYTHING else needs work, and he instruments u used are annoyinggg. 5/10 3/5
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its pretty good. it got kinda repeptitie tho and there was really no breakdown, just all build up....and with a trance song...you need that. drums also need to be a bit less repetitive. its good tho. 5/10 3/5
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its really good but windy oooaoaauuhhhh sound gets a little repetitive D: 4/5 7/10
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Its any okay loop but if youre gonna make it THAT short it kinda has to be freaking awesome, which its not. Still good tho, make a song ou of it. 3.5/5 5.5/10
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this song was great! I just think you coulda been a little more creative with the drums tho....everything else is amazing. keep it up! 9/10 4/5
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Thanks, I appreciate it! Sadly drums are my weakness :( I will try to work on them in future songs.
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its a good song, i just feel like some parts need more...idk...punch to it....and the drums could be a little more powerful too, which i think would be great for this song. other than that, its good! 8/10 4/5
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i dont like the drums tho, i think you should get some new samples! i think your transitions need a little work also. otherwise, great! 7.5/10 4/5
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Well to me this sounds like a few random notes played over and over while you turn a few knobs. I also recognize a few SLIGHTLY tweaked presets from the MicroKorg. If this was an ambient song I'd give it a 4, but as techno I'd give it about a two. For your next song try to develop a constant melody and add some drums, pads, bass, and all that. It seems like you did all this live, and unless you are reaally good at piano, i recommend you do some editing. There's tons of programs you could use, like FL studio, Cubase, Garage Band, etc. Its a good starting point though. I think itll be interesting to see how you progress. Keep working!
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I actually enjoyed this. Very smooth and professional.
Melodies were nice as well.
Not really into writing a long review so I will leave it at that.
5/5 9/10
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